Cinematography video feedback/learners response
Mr Halseys comment: some great shots and narrative is effective in engaging audience POV of the kick was excellent In other places, you lost focus (e.g. over the shoulder shot) In terms of narrative, needing to use text (2 hours later) is usually one to be avoided but nevertheless an effective response No titles/shot descriptions Feedback from fellow students: WWW: Good/interesting narrative range of shots music went well good acting good camera work captivating storyline very well plotted EBI: Add in the names of the camera shots Try and get cleaner shots Show different shots I believe I portrayed an interesting storyline where the range of shots with the rapid movements of each shot allowed the audience to feel on edge and more interested in the narrative. Also the music allowed this to happen as it gave that dramatic effect. The camera work was also good by Samie Miah as there were no shaking allowing people to be more focused on the narrative rathe...