Coursework: Script

Sajin calls Samie whilst moving around constantly through anxiety 

Sajin


' Bro i need your help i done something so stupid, please come collect me'

 Sajin has


Samie

'I've told you many times to fix up WHERE ARE YOU!



Samie is anger and emotion, drops his weapon to the floor and waits for his brother



Samie reads the text sent my Sajin and immediately departures



Samie is running vigorously 



Biggie (The killer)


 'Ay yo i think i see Sajin'




Biggie pulls out a gun and shoots Samie



Mandeep came to a realisation that Samie is dead because of Sajin



Mandeep phones Sajin with emotion



Mandeep


 i just of the phone with my cousin,Samie's dead Samie is dead man!its all your fault!




Sajin comes to the realisation of what hes done



Sajin texts V1 about what happens and assembles a crew



Crew then starts running into the getaway car and vigorously drives off





00:00:00 Music begins with voiceover
Over the shoulder shot from an estate block




Shot of a child being sent by an older male to a different county with the use of a bag (enigma code – what is in the bag)
Narrator:
‘I see kids everyday being sent to deliver something’


Scene where there is resistance between the child and the older but shows the older using force in order for the child to commit crimes
‘No one knows how many young kids are being forced to take part’


A scene of the train – showing transport
‘Children made to travel across countries’


A shot of money being laid out on a table
‘You coming home with unexplained money’


Shot of the a child being hesitant to knock on his house in order to face his parents
‘Thinking u can come back home to your mum and dad’


A shot of a child being unable to control himself due to a lot of stress
‘Thinking you mental health will be perfect’


A scene where a boy is forced to steal from Sainsbury in order to satisfy the older
‘Thinking you’re not going be forced to do petty crime’



‘Wish they knew how their mum and dad is feeling’

Music beat drops
Chris Cash - Dreams

‘Kids doing all this whilst the olders are…’


 Samie and sajin at a shisha cafe relaxing



 scene of a high quantity of cash










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